David Perry @ 2019-04-23 18:47:05
Anyone up for giving me some feedback and light proofing on an intricate toybox puzzle dungeon squished down into trifold pamphlet format? It contorts itself pretty tightly so I want to make sure it's comprehensible by someone who isn't me. I'll put a link to the google doc in a comment on the off chance you don't want to be tempted and spoiled for some reason. Also, it's called... MOON COLLEGE OF THE SPECTROMANTIC OCULARIA so there's that.
David Perry @ 2019-04-23 18:46:34
Keep in mind this is pamphlet format so the ordering is weird, but I trust you can figure it out. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BazKv1DhHR0DWOD7LUgM3pMTOMXh4SU_YxtnT8lfa-w/edit?usp=sharing Feel free to leave comments and change suggestions in the doc!
Harald Wagener @ 2019-04-23 20:10:40
nice! two little comments.
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